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1. True Liability (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
I can't really give you advice. Your grammar is solid and stories interesting. Comments, however, I can do. I enjoy your stories would like to see more from you.
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.08.03 12:22:00
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2. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Battle: the Beginning Dormid helped me out of the pod. We were already planetside, not too far from a mining facility. The battle was already starting, with explosions echoing in the background. GÇ£HowGÇÖs the ground?GÇ¥ Iridina asked. GÇ£Dirt...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.08.02 02:23:00
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3. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Inhuman I was pacing around the ship when I passed by Marttel. GÇ£Hold up,GÇ¥ he said. GÇ£Iridina wants to talk to you.GÇ¥ GÇ£Okay,GÇ¥ I said. Marttel opened the door he was leaning on. When I walked through, he shut it. GÇ£Hey there,GÇ¥ Iri...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.28 19:44:00
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4. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Joln GÇ£I think itGÇÖs here,GÇ¥ Livi said. Looking in the storeroom, I spotted a small crack in the wall. GÇ£If I wasnGÇÖt looking for a secret room,GÇ¥ I said, sticking a knife into the crack, GÇ£IGÇÖd think this is just a crack in a broken ...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.26 18:36:00
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5. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
False Security Rhythm heavy music greeted my ears. There were couples making out in the entry hall. Walking past them, and hearing more than a couple slaps as I past talking couples, I found the main room. A dance floor with flashing multicolo...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.26 04:03:00
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6. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Shore Leave The lights flashed on. GÇ£All hands, prepare for boarding procedures,GÇ¥ Livi said over the intercoms. GÇ£And what are we doing, exactly?GÇ¥ I heard Marttel yell. GÇ£Getting ready for a night on the town,GÇ¥ Livi said. Looking t...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.26 04:01:00
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7. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Rivalries Marttel was slamming his fists into a punching bag when I entered the room. GÇ£Ready?GÇ¥ he asked me. GÇ£Yes,GÇ¥ I said. GÇ£Step into my office,GÇ¥ Marttel said with a smile. He stood in the center of a circle that was on the floor...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.25 03:49:00
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8. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
History I was sitting on the bed, trying to remember where I was. The Calm Fire , Iridina's ship. My head was pounding. "Athena, you up?" Marttel asked from the other side of the door. "Yeah," I said. "Head down to the galley," Marttel said...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.24 15:56:00
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9. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Trust I sucked in all the air I could as I dropped to the ground. I was hyperventilating. GÇ£Breathe,GÇ¥ Iridina said. GÇ£Breathe. YouGÇÖre fine. Just breathe.GÇ¥ GÇ£What happened?GÇ¥ I asked, taking deep breaths. GÇ£You died,GÇ¥ Iridina sai...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.23 12:45:00
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10. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
First Impressions The MCC stopped, a lone green light illuminating the ship. GÇ£WeGÇÖre here,GÇ¥ Dormid said. GÇ£I will not hesitate when the test of Faith finds me, for only the strongest conviction will open the gates of paradise. My Faith i...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.23 12:40:00
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11. The Intaki Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
This is my first Fan Fiction here, though I have written Fan Fiction elsewhere. If my information is incorrect/inaccurate (especially for ships), then correct me. Prologue GÇ£Athena, run!GÇ¥ The tank fired, hitting the wall next to me. I ...
- by Athena Mirito - at 2013.07.22 14:44:00
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